“Following lunch, kids get to spend the rest of their day day in fun-filled-activities, sightseeing trips and excursions such as ice-skating at The Rockefeller Center, visiting the observation deck at The Empire State Building, or taking a ferry tour around The Statue of Liberty. And thats just to name a few of the incredible sights that New York has to offer.”
- A “The” should not be placed before Rockefeller Center.
- “thats” is incorrect. It should be “that’s.” I would reword this.
Robbing unsuspecting foreigners with your bullshit language school led by “Cambridge-qualified” teachers. Good job, thieves!
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