Sunday, February 17, 2013

International House World Organization: Provide great environments to learn

It would be nice if the aims of International House included writing grammatical sentences that make sense. The sentence below has faulty parallelism and bad punctuation. It is also very poorly worded.

“The aims of IH remain essentially the same as in Haycraft’s day, with a dedication to promoting international understanding through education, provide great environments to learn English and to take foreign-language classes and the raising of teacher-training standards worldwide.”

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Source: http://www.ihnewyork.com/ih-new-york.htm

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